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The Bookrapt Seminar for 2010 was held on Saturday August 7 and was, once again, a resounding success, thanks to our awesome speakers, authors Fleur Beale and Diana Neild, and illustrator Philip Webb (who has illustrated books for both Fleur and Diana.)
Thank you to everyone who came and, as always, an extra special thank-you to Chris and Warren Baskett from Books-a-Plenty for their support and their amazingly stocked book stall on the day.


Fleur Beale
The theme of this year's seminar was Inspiration & Illustration, and Fleur began by mentioning that the one question children always ask her is, "Where do your ideas come from?". The inspiration for Slide the Corner came from the simple fact that, at the time, there was no books set in New Zealand to interest Kiwi readers, and so Fleur wrote one.
The idea for Juno of Taris came during a trip to Ground Zero a month after 9/11, when everyone was being super-friendly to everyone else, American flags were everywhere, and New York had the feel of being an enclosed society looking inwards, with nothing coming from the outside. Fleur felt it would be interesting to write about an isolated society like that, and so the idea for Juno of Taris was born.
Fleur believes in doing a lot of thinking and research about her stories - and asking the questions about the idea of the story. She believes that time is a big part of the writing process, leaving a piece of writing for a month before coming back to it, reading it again, and then rewriting it.
The inspiration for the Quin Majik series also came about by identifying a gap in the market - at the time, Fleur says, all the fantasy stories were saccharin fairy tales for girls, with nothing gritty that boys could get their teeth into. At a book seminar Fleur noted that Ann Mallinson, of Mallinson Rendel, was buying such boys' stories, and when Fleur asked why she was buying them and not publishing them, Ann replied that there weren't any to publish. "Why don't you write one?" she suggested. Fleur didn't mention that she already had - but did e-mail it to Ann the next day. Ann loved it, and signed the story immediately.
Fleur likes to plan out the first seven or eight chapters of her books, and then just see what happens next as her characters take on their own lives. However, she did caution budding authors who let their characters do whatever they want to. Characters, Fleur says, can be like unruly children, and like, children, need discipline - an author does need to keep control of their characters and not give them a complete free rein.
Despite some recent predictions otherwise in the media, Fleur believes that the teen market is still robust, and that books are still popular, even with advances in technology such as i-readers. Indeed, about a month back when the #1 best seller at The Warehouse for that week was Stephenie Meyer's The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner, the book was available to download for free on Meyer's website. Fleur says that publishers never seen to know what the next trend will be, and points to the fact that six months before the Harry Potter phenomenon went super-nova Scholastic closed their fantasy Imprint because the genre was doing so badly.
Finally, Fleur reiterated the need for writers to read over their work after setting it aside for a time, and to be aware of the fact that it you find any part of your writing boring, then others surely will too. Write - leave - reread - rewrite.
Fleur Beale's Book Council page
Fierce September blog
Philip Webb
Philip is an extremely talented artist, who has illustrated the writings for both of the other seminar speakers, as well as for the likes of Joy Cowley and Pat Quin. Philip started illustrating educational readers, and has only recently moved into picture books. With the number of New Zealand authors having international success there is now, Philip says, more opportunity for illustrators within New Zealand.
Philip seems to have enjoyed an illustration process than many illustrators (and writers) would be envious of - one of high collaboration between him and the authors whose work he brings to life. Philip had table discussions with Fleur Beale and Ann Mallinson about illustrating Fleur's work, and had many a conversation with Diana Neild before the pigs of Piggity Wiggity Jiggity Jig reached their final form.
The process of illustration that Philip undertakes is different for chapter books and story books. For the former, he begins with black and white pencil sketches, that can changed easily if needed, then uses penline for the finished artwork that is inked over the top and finished with watercolour. For picture books Philip begins with character sketches, storyboarding the entire book on a page, then uses a water-soluble terracotta pencil, applies the watercolour, and uses an HB to finish, concentrating on a skilful blending of line, tone, and watercolour.
Philip had a delightful presentation that he shared with the audience, that included early black and white sketches of Diana Nield's pigs, as well as a veritable array of his other work.
Philip Webb's website
Diana Nield
Diana gave an enthralling and hilarious talk, beginning with some anecdotes of her life as a young girl on a very remote farm in the Waikato, where they had no TV, and the long bus ride to Primary School was a Major Social Event. Diana began writing rhythm and rhyme stories at school, and over the years used them for parties, weddings, 21sts, and apologies to teachers for children's absenteeism.
She further developed her writing skills at Boarding School, where the students were "forced" to write a letter home every Sunday. Diana said this taught her to say what she wanted to say in writing, and taught the valuable skills of making the letters as interesting as possible (for her parents) and how to say something nice about something that wasn't really nice at all (that present from Grandma).
Originally applying for journalism school, Diana ended up studying music instead, had four kids, and learnt what worked in writing that was intended to be read aloud to children. As much as she loved Postman Pat, Diana found that the stories, that took 15 minutes to read aloud, were too long for a busy parent, and so she developed the idea of putting her energy into writing something that could be read aloud in three to four minutes. The release of the "only-published-because-the-author-is-famous" Budgie the Little Helicopter books added further determination to Diana to write something that was good.
Diana played around with hard letters that sounded good aloud - p, d, j, x, and z - originally wanted a dog, but decided that was too close to Hairy Maclary and settled on pig. She wanted a lot of characters, as the stories are really about human interaction and relationships, did not want any technology in the stories (no TV, radio, etc), and wanted a father-figure that had a prominent role. Diana was not keen on the habit at the time of belittled father figures, such as found in The Berenstain Bears and on The Cosby Show, and wanted a dad who could be respected.
Once Diana had her characters, she chose their names on the basis of the ease of being able to rhyme something with them, and then developed each character's likes, dislikes, and relationships. Once the characters were sorted, Diana found it easy to put the story together. She optimistically sent the manuscript off - and promptly received four rejection letters. Deciding that the story had an English flavour she sent it to Walker Books in London, who loved it, but (possibly somewhat condescendingly) said children weren't capable of understanding long words. At this Diana decided to just write the entire series and leave them for her grandchildren to enjoy, and to publish long after she was gone to fund themselves through college. However, with no publishing deal and no realistic incentive to write the piggies were put on the back burner for six years, until Diana's Uncle looked into self-publishing, and offered to pay for the pigs to see the light.
Diana had the pictures done for the story, and then ended up in touch with John McIntyre, who looked at the ready-to-print book and said "Story - brilliant, pictures - adequate". John took the story in hand, wrote to publishers himself, and had the story picked up by Scholastic. After a long wait Diana was told that the new illustrator would be Philip Webb. "Philip who?" she thought, and was horrified when visiting his website to discover that there was NOT A SINGLE PICTURE OF A PIG! She sent him an e-mail at 8am, received sketches back at 4pm, and knew that his pigs were perfect. Scholastic arranged a meeting between the two, and Diana was soon convinced that her pigs were in the best trotters possible.
At the launch it seems, by the photos that Diana showed the Seminar audience, that the entire local (Palmerston North) community got in behind the pigs - not just school children, but lawyers, businessmen, bankers, and politicians came dressed as pigs in full costumes made by Diana and the Piggity Props Department, along with polystyrene recreations of Philip Webb's wonderful illustrations. The local newspaper produced a six-page broadsheet The Daily Porker especially for the launch, and children re-enacted scenes from the stories.
Diana finished her talk by offering aspiring authors the same advice that Fleur Beale did - write - leave - return - rewrite. If something doesn't fit, take it out - even if it is hard to let go. Diana feels that her musical background has been important for her writing, as it taught her how to practice, practice, practice until everything is perfect. And perfect Diana's pigs certainly are.
Diana Neild's Book Council page

Bookrapt does it again!
Another successful seminar was attended by 53 children's literature enthusiasts, eager to hear the three guest speakers, to browse through the selection of books on sale, and to catch up with friends or meet new ones. This year's Bookrapt seminar featured authors Philippa Werry and Jenny Hessell, and writer/illustrator Gavin Bishop. Each are talented in their own way, and it was inspirational listening to each one speak and share their ideas about writing and give us insights into their work.
(Thank you to Lee Rowe and Barbara Dobson for the reviews of the speakers, and to Angie Belcher for the photographs from the Seminar.)
Philippa Werry.
Philippa Werry talked about the extensive background research she did on her excellent children's novel Enemy at the Gate , that tells the story of a family dealing first hand with the polio epidemic of 1936-37. The novel weaves in some key historical events and people of the time - Jack Lovelock, Shirley Temple, and the Depression.
Philippa talked about the importance of including only the essence of the historical facts - otherwise the history can swamp the story. She described how her earlier writing for the School Journal had introduced her to historical research and how she had gathered and filed copious information as background to this story. While thorough research builds a rich backdrop for a story, knowing when to stop researching and start writing is important. It is, she emphasised, the story itself that is of the utmost importance - the research informs the story as the writer considers the impact of historical events on the lives of her characters.
Anyone who has read this fabulous book knows that she achieves this very well indeed.
Philippa emphasised the need to have more than one idea in order to create a novel and cited a useful website by Patrick Ness, writer in residence for the Booktrust in England . His tips for writers can be accessed on the Booktrust website.
The Wellington Children's Book Association, of which Philippa is a member, will later this year host a seminar for writers entitled Spinning Gold . While registrations are closed, she hopes it may be offered again in future years.
Gavin Bishop
Gavin Bishop spoke first of his involvement in Te Tai Tamariki - a trust set up to preserve and promote New Zealand children's literature. The vision is to provide a repository in which original copies of manuscripts, illustrations and other pertinent materials will be housed and made available for researchers, exhibitions and tours. Margaret Mahy and Joy Cowley have already promised their available works. For more information go visit the Te Tai Tamariki website.
He also promoted the Storylines Gavin Bishop Award which will provide an aspiring illustrator the chance to work with Gavin to bring a work to publication.
Gavin didn't do any research on his book Piano Rock until he'd finished it (and only to check some of the facts) - but this was appropriate as it was a personal memoir of his life as a young boy in 1950s New Zealand. In verifying the details of remembered times and events he had to deal with a young editor who questioned many of his references.
Gavin shared with us the process he used to create the illustrations for two recent books: There was an Old Woman and There was a Crooked Man , in which he used a monoprint technique, to achieve bigger, bolder images for younger children. He is, he said, influenced by his own grandchildren (and his failing eyesight!). He has been simplifying the illustrative techniques he uses, and although he made it sound easy, he has an incredible talent with a huge amount of expertise and skill. His just published board books speak of this - they are simply world class. The vertical format is intriguing and works with the board book format, story (nursery rhymes), and illustrative style.
Gavin then treated the audience to a preview of his new book Cowshed Christmas , to be released in October. Based on a story by Joy Cowley, Gavin used a variety of techniques to create the delightful images of the farm animals bringing their typically NZ gifts to the cowshed on Christmas morning.
For more information on Gavin, visit his website www.gavinbishop.com.
Jenny Hessell
Jenny Hessell spoke about the process of writing , and the importance of nurturing ideas to ensure the best possible story development. She talked about Roald Dahl's driftwood analogy, that of a piece of wood dipped into the water with a piece of string attached. Every now and again you'll pull the piece of wood out and something interesting will be attached - like a barnacle or some seaweed - and over time a story builds up from all these interesting bits and pieces. Stories are like this, and need to be left to accumulate ideas and gather layers This was not, Jenny said, what we tended to do in schools, where students are expected to write spontaneously, with no time to grow their ideas. Exposing children to the richness of language - playing with words so they develop an ear for language - is far more important than forcing children write. She believes good writing mainly comes from the subconscious.
Jenny Hessell spoke about the process of writing, and shared the wonderful metaphor from Roald Dahl about writing being like Jenny read a couple of her Grandma McGarvey books to the audience - a real treat to hear these famous and well loved stories told in the author's voice.
Jenny is best known for her Grandma McGarvey books, but in fact her first publication was of a far more serious nature. What's Wrong with Bottoms? confronted the issue of sexual abuse and received a mixed response from would be publishers - one of which told her that she would never ever be published! Jenny entertained us with readings of two Grandma stories, a real treat to hear these famous and well loved stories told in the author's voice. She also shared insights into her collaboration with illustrator Trevor Pye. She was a strong advocate for authors' rights, and the importance of negotiation with publishers to ensure control over the integrity of their work.
The three speakers shared with us their varying perspectives on writing and illustrating, and while their approaches may differ, the underlying principle is the same - that the story is of primary importance.
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"Storytellers' Secrets" was the title of the 25 th annual Bookrapt Seminar, and an eager audience of members and guests furiously scribbled down the Secrets revealed by three accomplished New Zealand storytellers – Sharon Holt, author of the popular Skipper books in the Ready to Read Series, Fifi Colston, from TVNZ's “Good Morning”, and Moira Wairama, from Wellington's Baggage Arts Charitable Trust.
Attending a Bookrapt Seminar is always exciting not only because of the high caliber of the speakers, but the fact that local authors such as Lynley Dodd, Sherryl Jordan, Angie Belcher, Jean Bennett, Alison Robertson, Etheljoy Smith, and Jenny Jenkins can be seen dotted throughout the audience.
Sharon Holt
Sharon Holt pointed out that in 2003 she had been a member of the audience, listening to inspirational talks by Joy Cowley, Pamela Allen, and Lorraine Orman. She had no idea at the time that five years later she would be a Seminar speaker.
With dreams of being an author as a child, Sharon 's eventual career path followed teaching and journalism, until rediscovering picture books with her own children rekindled the passion to write and be published.
Sharon writes from her own memories and experiences. A story published in the school journal featured the removal of a large phoenix palm from her property. Her book Off you go, Auntie Ma! was inspired by daughter Sophie's kindergarten antics, and her play Superglue resulted when Sharon needed to buy some superglue, and son Gregory asked if Superglue wears a cape.
The key to a writer's success, Sharon believes, is to follow instructions well. Locate a copy of the publisher's guidelines, write what they want, and change whatever they want changed. Skipper the Dog was originally Moose the Cat, but was changed at the publisher's request. As Sharon says, the publishers could have changed Moose the Cat to a hedgehog if they wanted to, as long as they paid her. The first play Sharon 's submitted to Learning Media was accepted, Sharon believes, because she first read their other plays, asked Learning Media what they wanted, and wrote a play that met that need.
Another of Sharon 's Secrets, which can be a little depressing for a struggling author, is that initial excitement by the publisher doesn't necessarily lead to a project achieving fruition immediately. Her Its True! You Can Make Your Own Jokes
book had a list of publishers wanting it, but which was then vetoed by the sales departments at the publishers, who said it would not sell. Of course, sales teams often get it wrong, as those who rejected Harry Potter learnt to their despair. Once Sharon 's book was finally published it went on to be nominated as a finalist in the non-fiction category of the 2007 New Zealand Post Book Awards for Children and Young People, and was on the Storylines 2007 Notable Books list.
Sharon believes the most important step an author can take is to get an agent. When she mentioned having manuscripts returned with the comment "It doesn't fit our publishing programme", there were many nods of agreement throughout the audience. An agent knows the publishing programmes, and will e-mail you details of exactly what publishers are currently looking for.
Sharon's NZ Book Council page
Sharon's Learning Media Contributor Newsletter
Fifi Colston
Fifi Colston was a familiar face to many in the audience from the arts and crafts segment she presents on TVNZ's Good Morning. Fifi delighted the audience with tales, and photographs, from her childhood, which included time spent in Africa and immigrating to New Zealand on the Achille Lauro . Always a good illustrator she sold a pen and ink drawing of a pet parrot at the age of 13 for $5 – quite an impressive sum for a young teenager in 1973.
Fifi put in three years of solid graft at design school before heading to the advertising agencies for the money, which is far in excess of what one can earn as the Illustrator of children's books in New Zealand . Although Fifi joked that she became the "Blueberry Queen" when designing for a yoghurt company, was obvious that this wasn't where her passion lay. Following a move to Christchurch she became a freelance illustrator, and teamed up with Anthony Holcroft to produce The Old Man and the Cat and The Oldest Garden in China .
Fifi's first Storytellers' Secret was that publishers generally do not want writers who are also illustrators (unless their name happens to be Lynley Dodd), and neither do they want submissions from writers who have had their work illustrated by a friend or acquaintance. Fifi managed to partially circumvent this frustrating situation during her seven years working for TV3's What Now magazine – as the Art Director she could commission her own work, and that of her friends. Fifi did also mention that if you are an author and your work has been illustrated by someone else and you feel the illustrations are not up to standard, then do say something to your publisher. If you say nothing, nothing will be done.
A Secret Fifi revealed for writers is that you do not want children to read your work, you want them to feel it. She also said that budding writers and illustrators should go where writers and illustrators are – by joining organisations such as Bookrapt and Tauranga Writers.
Although it is a well known fact that writing and illustrating children's books in New Zealand is more frequently done for live and kudos than money, Fifi did reveal that Learning Media do pay reasonably well for the work they accept.
Fifi reiterated Sharon 's Secret of writing what publishers want. When opening, the then fairly new, Next magazine Fifi noted there was no poetry in the magazine. She scribbled down a “Pam Ayres style” poem, sent it off, and as a result wrote a monthly column for the magazine for eight years.
The Secret of where Fifi's ideas come from is something she calls that “What if question”. At the supermarket one day she noticed the teller's name badge said “Verity”, and thought, “What if a girl called Verity always told lies?” From this “what if question” the book, Verity's Truth was born. When watching Jamie Oliver one day, Fifi thought, “What if you were a girl, and you couldn't cook, and your name was Jan ie Olive?”, from which emerged the book Jan ie Olive – a Recipe for Disaster .
Fifi also adheres to the Storytellers' Secret of, do what your publisher asks. If they ask you to rewrite something, rewrite it, as Fifi had to do to the entire middle section of Verity's Truth . “Trust your editor”, she says, “they know what they're doing. In fact, ask them what to do.”
A final Storytellers' Secret that Fifi imparted is that while it is very important for an author to know the entire back story in their work, this doesn't necessarily have to be told in the story itself – a mistake Fifi believes many authors make.
Fifi's Blog
Fifi's NZ Book Council Page
Fifi's TVNZ page
Fifi's Christchurch City Libraries Page
Fifi's Storylines page
Moira Wairama
Moira is a member of Wellington 's Baggage Arts Charitable Trust, especially well known for their combined telling of Maori, African and Native American myths and legends. They also tell their own original stories and a range of tales from other traditions.
As a young child Moira filled her school exercise books with stories, a creative outlet that came to a grinding halt at a secondary school that frowned on fictional writing. However, the school for some reason, accepted poetry, so Moira turned to that genre, which today she knows is an excellent way to start young teenagers off as writers. Through her work as a teacher Moira has noted that poetry is very good at providing an outlet for the pent up angst of young male teenagers, and that often those who move through their angst would go on to create insightful and beautiful work.
Although not Maori herself, Moira has been speaking Maori for 12 years, and worked part time for many years at Te Ara Whanui Kura Kaupapa Maori. She is passionate about the language and culture, and about creating the caliber of books in Maori that kids will want to learn and read. Whenever Moira speaks at schools she takes both English and Maori language versions of her book The Puppet Box with her, and it is always the Maori version the kids want to hear. A Catch-22 seems to exist in New Zealand whereby publishers do not send out information about books in Maori unless schools ask for them, so the schools do not know that the books exist in order to ask for them.
Moira backed up Fifi and Sharon 's comments that Learning Media is a great organisation to write for, with good editors who provide a good way for new authors to learn about how to get their work published. A Secret that Moira shared is that, when writing picture books, you should use your illustrator to help tell the story. She points out that the illustrations in Te Pouaka Karetao (the Maori language version of The Puppet Box ) are so good, that even children who do not speak Maori can follow the story.
Another Secret is that we are all storytellers and we all want to be listened to. Find the story you want to tell, and keep working at it. Do not let rejection get you down, and keep plugging away at it. Harry Potter taught us that publishers do turn down good stories, so keep pushing. Sometimes an author needs to think outside the square to tell their story in a different place – for example, many of Moira's stories are not written down, but are told orally, or in a different way.
Moira's play Questions , about suicide, began as a poem, which she decided was not enough of a vehicle to address the issue. Picked up by a TV producer, Moira had the unique experience of turning the play into a TV script with the help of acclaimed New Zealand actor and director Ian Mune. They were told the show shouldn't be done, that it was irresponsible and that it would trigger suicides. Moira replied that being quiet about the issue wouldn't stop it, and said that, as an author, you have to know when to stand up for your story.
A Secret imparted that Moira learned during the production of Questions is that while as the author of a stage play you maintain some control over your work, as the author of a TV production you lose almost all control – something for authors who are intending to script write should consider.
Moira also stressed the importance for authors and illustrators to be surrounded by like-minded people by joining authors' groups, as fellow writers will keep you on your toes and challenge you to continually write.
And a final Secret from Moira – you can make a living as a writer or illustrator in New Zealand ; you just have to be practical about it. Do not quit full time work and throw yourself into your craft, if it means you cannot pay the mortgage. Retain enough guaranteed income to pay for rent and food, and realise that you don't need a lot of other stuff if you are to follow your passion. And do it now – you do not know what is around the corner, and you will not have more time as you get older, you will have less.
Moira's Baggage Arts Charitable Trust page
Moira's Storylines page

The 2007 seminar showcased some of
New Zealand’s most successful male authors, Ken Catran, Phil Smith, and Brian Falkner, as well as the official book launches for Phyllis Johnston's new novel Dead Dan's Dee and the latest Sherryl Jordan novel in the Denzil series The Silver Dragon as part of the new box set The Adventures of Denzil.
Ken Catran
Ken is one of New Zealand's most acclaimed authors, and is spending this year as the Writer In Residence at Waikato University. Many of Ken's novels have a basis in hisorical war facts, and Ken gave a fascinating talk on the changing face of war history - real history v common history.
Ken said that because of embargoes on historical facts, often of 50 years, much of what was taught for years was actually based on propaganda, not fact. As an example Ken cited the classic legend of Heinrich Himmler having bitten on a cyanide capsule at the end of WWII. Embargoed documents released 18 months ago showed that he was actually killed by the British.
Much of what today's kids believe comes from watching television, and what is on tv is often only one person's view of something. Ken's extensive research allows him to find out the real truth behind the stories, and to try and convey this truth through his novels.
Ken spoke of the novel he is currently working on as Writer in Residence, Wood Dragon and Fire Rooster, set during the fall of Singapore where 30,000 Japanese troops defeated 130,000 Allied troops.
The novel tells the story of two young men, one Chinese and one Kiwi, who get seperated from their armies in the jungle. Initially they try to kill each other, but then settle into a truce, and the story traces the complexity of their two different lives as they learn to trust each other - a trust used against them by other people. Ken's extensive research into his novels, particularly of the little things about history that make his books interesting and real to the reader. His new novel will be released through Harper Collins in 2008 or 2009.
Ken spoke of the dichotomy of children and adult's novels, of the lack of young adult fiction being produced in New Zealand, and of the lack of Government support for children's drama productions. He stated the importance of experimental reading for 9-12 year olds, and of the particular importance of getting your kids to expand their horizons and imagination and extend their vocabularies, particularly through reading fantasy. In this television and texting age kids are rapidly losing the ability to communicate, and they need to read and think to be aware not only of a world beyond television, but to be aware that what the television tells them about the world is not necessarily true.
Ken's advice for aspiring novelists trying to get published:
- Check the genre of publishers - it is no good trying to sell a science fiction manuscript to a publisher of romance novels
- Browse through books in the library to find out who publishes what
- Make sure the publishers you approach handle the age group you are aiming for (children/young adults/adults)
- Join a Writers' Group - the advice and support you gain from such groups is immeasureable
- Check out the Writers' Guild website.
- Write, re-write, and re-write. Ken gets the first draft of a new novel on paper within 2-3 weeks. It then sits for months before he begins the first re-write, which establishes the characters and personal relationships. The final manuscript will still require an editor.
For more information on Ken check out:
Phil Smith
Ex-journalist Phil's first published novel The Unknown Zone was a winner in the New Zealand Post Book Awards Children and Young Adults section in 2006.
Phil began his talk by reminiscing about Randy Stone's radio show Night Beat in the mid 1950s (that produced a number of nods and "Mmm-hmmms" from the audience). It was this show that inspired Phil to become a writer.
Phil backed up Ken's comments about today's kids whose minds have been anaesthetised by television and dumbed down, and he spoke of how the best stories are still conveyed orally. He enthused about the general knowledge and stories that older people tell, and told of his grandmother's stories of coming over on the Athena and berthing next to Amundsen's ship after their successful assault on the South Pole. Mandrake the Magician, Superman, Spiderman, and war comics formed the foundation of Phil's writing influences, and he began a career as a proofreader and then sports journalist in 1965 at the Rotorua Daily Post.
From journalism Phil learnt the old maxim "I keep six honest serving men, they taught me all I knew, their names are What and Why and When and How and Where and Who". This, says Phil, is all there is to writing a novel, although he also spoke of Stephen King's methodology of novel writing: Narrative, Description, and Dialogue.
Phil spoke of the difference between journalism and novel writing - the former being (generally) about tragedy and misfortune, is full of facts and quotations, and does not usually connect emotionally with the reader.
During Phil's time as a journalist, which included three years working for World Vision, his favourite subjects to interview were authors, whom he interrogated as to their habits to try and discover their secrets. At a Bookrapt seminar some years ago Phil heard David Hill talk, which inspired him to tackle The Unknown Zone.
The novel Phil is currently working on is about a young man who travels from Hokianga to Sandhurst, and receives an award for distinguished services in the Falkland Islands. For guidance on this novel, says Phil, he turned to Phyllis Johnston's The Fugitive Soldier.
Phil's advice for aspiring novelists trying to get published.
- Join a writers group such as Bookrapt
- Write a first draft, then revise, and re-revise
- Expect that 10% of effort will go into the first draft and 90% of effort will go into revisions
- In particular look for illogical sequences, excess words, vocabulary and grammar
- Accept that writing a novel is like building a boat - the closer you get to finishing, the more little things there are that need doing
- Have a supportive partner and/or family
- Start with an idea, then build the main characters and crisis
- Allow the characters to develop minds and personalities of their own, and to say their own things
- Be conscious of your audience as you write and choose a genre that is compatible with your ability
- Conduct extensive research for the back story of your novel - good fiction is as much fact as fiction - there needs to be a sense of recognition for the reader to make it seem real
- Put aside thoughts of am I going to make it? and is it worthwhile? and write for your passion.
- Just tell the story.
For more information on Phil check out
Brian Falkner
Brian's talk was entitled Birth of a Novel - Rejection - Redemption - and the Road to The Long White Cloud.

As with Ken and Phil, Brian has a commercial writing background, as a radio journalist and as an advertising copywriter. He was acclaimed as being the top of this field in New Zealand, and won a string of national and international copywriting awards.
Brian's dreams of being a writer started at intermediate school even though, he happily admits, you have to be mad to want to be a writer. You have to deal with writers' block, years of research for back story, drafts, redrafts, and discarding loved characters who just don't work. You have to write for the love of doing it as your chances of getting published are very low. Brian suggested the need for a Writers' Helpline, something like the gambling helpline, as writing becomes an addiction and the writing addict becomes removed from the real world living, instead, in a fantasy world of their own creation.
Many a laugh was heard from the audience when Brian put up the following "rejection" letter, as it was something probably everyone in the audience could identify with:

Brian's first attempt at becoming a published writer was with a children's book. It was rejected.
His second attempt was a psychological thriller. It was rejected.
His third attempt was a short story. It was rejected.
His fourth attempt was a play. It was rejected.
His fifth attempt was a screenplay for Shortland Street. It was rejected (before it was even written).
His sixth attempt was a romance novel. It was rejected.
His seventh attempt was a screenplay for the NZ Film Commission. It was rejected.
His eighth attempt was a screenplay for a James Bond movie. It was rejected. And he was threatened with legal action for using the James Bond character.
His ninth attempt was a novel for young adults. Scholastic rejected it. Harper Collins rejected it with a full page letter telling him how appalling they thought it was. Mallinson Rendel LOVED IT!!!
All the years of rejection and hard work paid off - Henry and the Flea was published by Mallinson Rendall and was nominated for a LIANZA Award in 2004, ironically losing out to Ken Catran.
Praise for The Real Thing was equally high but then, just to show that even published authors don't have it all their own way, his third manuscript for Cave Dogs (intended to be the first of a trilogy) was rejected by Mallinson Rendall. His fourth manuscript, Super Freak, was picked up though and Brian once again gained the "immense satisfaction from (reading) nice reviews".
His current manuscript, The Long White Cloud, was rejected, but Brian thought back to the rejection he had received from Harper Collins and the fact that the same manuscript was accepted by Mallinson Rendel. Rejection letters from publishers are often only one person's opinion.
Believing that a manuscript has a better chance of being read if the author visits the publisher, and heading to L.A. anyway, Brian made the trip to New York to do the rounds of the publishers there. No one was really interested. Then he met an agent who was really interested, and who had a contact at Random House. Waiting at the airport to return home his mobile rang - it was his agent calling to say Random House had made a pre-emptive six-figure ($U.S.) offer for The Long White Cloud and for a second novel.
Brian had the current manuscript with him at the seminar, the third draft, and it was interesting, and scary, to see just how many pencil comments the editors had made on the third draft. The manuscript has been renamed for the U.S. market, and The Tomorrow Code is scheduled for release in September 2008.
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Phyllis Johnston
- book launch for Dean Dan's Dee
Phyllis has been with Bookrapt since its first meeting in 1983 (as the Bay of Plenty Children's Literature Association), where she was elected President, a role she held until 1996. Born into a large family of readers and oral story tellers, she wrote down many of their pioneer stories when she started writing nearly three decades ago.
Phyllis's latest novel tells the story of Dee, who is proud to be the daughter of a brave soldier father who died
fighting in the war. After the Great War, Dee lives at the beach along with her mother and
aunt. It’s a paradise for Dee, with the sun, the sea and the sky, but little
by little her seaside haven disintegrates. Her mother and aunt become
very ill, leaving Dee abandoned.
However, soldier Joe has never forgotten his promise to his army
mate, Dan, Dee’s dead father. He and Essie take Dee north into half-
broken bush country. Roaming the countryside, doing farm work, and
making friends, Dee is almost happy again, but shadows hang over her
life in Mamaku. Joe and Essie can’t afford high school for her, and all
the kids seem to know something Dee doesn’t - something about her soldier father Dan.
Told with subtlety and charm, this is a poignant, bighearted story - of honour, courage and the aftermath of war.
It was a bitter sweet launch for Phyllis's latest book, as we were also officially farewelling her following her move to the Waikato (we hope they appreciate it!) Longacre very generously provided a morning tea for the launch, which was attended not only by the seminar guests but by a large number of Phyllis's friends and family too.
Phyllis's publisher, Longacre Press, sent the following message which was read out at the launch by Angie Belcher:
Longacre was delighted to discover Dead Dan's Dee in the large, curving pile of incoming manuscripts. Here was a fresh voice, a sensitive but feisty protagonist; and a rich story from our collective past of one girl's compelling journey. We are proud to be sending Phyllis's book out into the world and wish her all the best, along with Dee who is poised to enter the imaginations of young New Zealand readers.
- Regards Barbara Larson, Penelope Todd and the team at Longacre Press

Sherryl Jordan
- book launch for The Silver Dragon
Sherryl is the full-time author of many internationally critically acclaimed fantasy novels. The latest novel in the Denzil series, The Silver Dragon has been released as part of a boxed set of the entire series, The Wednesday Wizard, Denzil's Dilema, and The Great Bear Burglary.
The Silver Dragon was Scholastic's Book of the Month for July 2007, and Sherryl's editor Penny Scown, joined us at the launch. Thank you to Scholastic for kindly providing some bubbly for the day.



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